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Post by Elijah Cage on May 20, 2007 0:31:47 GMT -5
So I made my first RP for Elijah. What do you guys think? It's my first ever so I know its not perfect.
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Post by Lance Erikson on May 20, 2007 2:07:03 GMT -5
Well, I liked it. The way I see to improve it is to expand on it more, more detail, a bit more about the match. Just round it out i guess. But for your first one, it was great.
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Post by Lance Erikson on May 20, 2007 2:08:04 GMT -5
Use teddy's and mine as reference is you need, I'm sure he won't mind as long you don't rip us off, lol.
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Post by Elijah Cage on May 20, 2007 2:46:29 GMT -5
LOL cool. I was just gonna ask you if i can mention you guys for my RP. I'll work on another one tomorrow. Well now that you mention it, my RP was a little bit too short.
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Post by David Hilt on May 20, 2007 3:36:12 GMT -5
You don't really need permission to mention anyone in your RPs. Matter of fact, you could make a whole RP dedicated to bashing the hell out of one specific character. The only thing you need to ask permission for is actually using them in your RP, especially if there's a physical altercation.
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Post by Lance Erikson on May 20, 2007 4:17:06 GMT -5
Davey Boy nailed it on the head. Talk all the trash you want to about your opponent. Look at mine and Teddy's, they're pretty much bash fests with a bit of story at the begging for character development, lol. It does help when you have something on your opponent that you can take and go all out on. Look at your opponent's bio and RP's and then plan your attack after that. Some people work better when they have something to react to, I.E. an RP from an opponent and others like to get in that first strike. Figure out what you like to do, and come up with your own style, after all, it's all about fun right?
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Post by Rich Maxwell on May 20, 2007 13:40:09 GMT -5
Ah....
Hmm...
....you might wanna....hmm...
Damn it, Lance pretty much covered everything there....thanks ya'bastahd.
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Post by Elijah Cage on May 20, 2007 13:54:30 GMT -5
LOL! New RP up. Road to GCW. Again to all of you that prematurely read it: I finally finished it. Damn how'd i press post on accident? Also, you guys know when that Sipriani guy is gonna post an RP? He's takin forever!
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Post by William Ellis on May 20, 2007 14:51:33 GMT -5
Generally I won't post my opinion on your RP's, but I will say that your second RP was a big improvement compared to your first one.
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Post by Elijah Cage on May 20, 2007 15:14:13 GMT -5
Wow! Complimented by the Administrator himself!
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Post by Lance Erikson on May 21, 2007 0:49:33 GMT -5
Well, Willy there said it best, that last one was a lot better. Oh, and thanks Rich, I try to be thorough
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Post by Elijah Cage on May 25, 2007 2:05:15 GMT -5
Attention!! New RP up!! Road to GCW part 2!! comment back here with your thoughts afterwards..... Have a Nice day!!
P.S. 3 more days till Storm!!!!
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Post by Elijah Cage on May 29, 2007 21:34:55 GMT -5
New RP up.......thoughts?
p.s. Lance has my vote. Go Lance!
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Post by Elijah Cage on Jun 8, 2007 19:58:32 GMT -5
hey you guys. I tried a different approach to my new RP. Tell me what you guys think.
And no, the person who wrote the RP isn't a different person. Thats all me. ;D
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